Come Sit With Me-Revised (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 30, 2013

Dan, I came and sat at my computer to be with you and I am glad that I did. Your poem is a sensuous creation with lines to die for. "With fingers dancing through soft and sensuous ripples" not the least of them. This work has a superbly gentle quality about it. I wish you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on March 24, 2013

what lady could ever deny this seductive invitation...one of my favprites...only 'one of'...would be hard to choose the 'most' one of yours...pat

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

Sweetly inviting, a gift well-shared through your verses, Dan. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 20, 2013

Dan this is so sweetly romantic and sensual with such a classical feel to it.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 19, 2013

A beautiful invitation for two hearts to enjoy.

Ron

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on March 19, 2013

A wondrous walk and quite similar
to one I am writing now :)

Lovely, very much enjoyed this Dan

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on March 19, 2013

here is a walk worth taking
budd

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 19, 2013

Sounds like a marvelous place to sit.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

Such a brilliant invitation!
she could Not possibly decline!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

This work has a nice easy feel to it,the only thing missing is some rustling autumn leaaves.....thanks Dan, nicely done

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

this is sensuous gentle writing, Dan,
an evocative poem that stays in the senses
long after i've read it;
no pun intended, your closing line is majestic

i'm saving this to my library

john

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

You know I keep reading new favorites from you TD... I love this...absolutely love it!
hugs and cheers
SPP

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

Just a glorious invite to your loved one, and with such beauty that obliterates any reason to decline! Such gorgeous writing :))xx
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

Beautifully thought out seduction you have given us here, Dan. A step-by-step procedure on how to bill and coo as it were.