I think of the blonde child on the westward train. Over and over on the midnight coach the metronome of her words kept time with the rails. "Nobody," she said over and over. "Nobody." And when the lights of Topeka flickered across her face in a bluish flame, she leaned toward the swaying aisle of darkness, and she said it vaguely, and finally afraid, she pressed her body slowly back and said it so gently, so sweetly to the train that carried her from one darkness into the next.
excellent description and powerful poem, C.J. I could feel the train and hear her voice here. Love how you end this. Subtle perfection that underscores the emotional tone...
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
expressed to the point of
wondering....enjoyed it
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