Good Morning Linda,
What A Lovely Treasure Your Have From Your Days Of Being A Little Girl!
This Write Is So Precious. Your Beautiful Words From So Long Ago Are Penned Like A Princess!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
I thought it was a believable poem for a ten year old. I'm not a critic and never will be but if I were a teacher in an English Literature Class you would definitely not get an F. Blessings Always, Paul.
Thanks for your opinion David. Obviously you didn't know me at 10 or the environment I was raised in. Only then would you understand why I very clearly knew the concept of wanting and dreaming. You are right with most of your other accusations--probably written quickly (maybe when I was hiding in the chicken coup), no idea about construction, it is repetitive and some of the other things you said. Although at 10, I wasn't very demanding -- too intimidated for that. So if you were my teacher and I was 10 would I get an F in poetry?
Linda
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
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Such maturity.
I hope you want for nothing !
Tony
What A Lovely Treasure Your Have From Your Days Of Being A Little Girl!
This Write Is So Precious. Your Beautiful Words From So Long Ago Are Penned Like A Princess!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
I still do! And I wouldn't worry about that very nasty critic below.
Write On!
I thought it was a believable poem for a ten year old. I'm not a critic and never will be but if I were a teacher in an English Literature Class you would definitely not get an F. Blessings Always, Paul.
Linda