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Fire Dancer
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Amid the intense, painful burning of the flames, The Fire Dancer dances on.

She dances into the fire,
Hysterical laughter bubbles forth, as the flames rise higher.
She is engulfed in searing pain,
She sings Bye Bye Blackbird over and over again.
" Here no one loves or understands me", is her favorite part,
She sings it with feeling, that come from her heart.
As The Fire Dancer sways amid the flames,
Her eyes glow brightly, her long dark hair is a tangled mane.
She babbles to herself, she looks quite insane.
She has no name, for she is just smoke,
To those that behold, she is a joke.
She is so weary of dancing to another's tune,
She requests for solace, to bathe her in the light from the moon.
Angry voices ridicule her as she sways,
She bearly can hold on, day after day.

  

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 Reviews of "Fire Dancer"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
A compelling offering throughout, SC. It is very moving. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis (Professor Dreamy)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Great images captured in the traditional style that keeps the culture and lure of the native American dancing in the mind long after the reading is over.

Fee

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Staggering intensity of emotion in this write, PA. "She is so weary of dancing to another's tune" You, my friend, will never do this. You are certainly an individual. Great write. Lydi**

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
oh the burning heart ache,the searing pain,the dance of death,this poems pulls me into te fire with her.Nice write SC

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
I love this one. Such great images! May she find her solace. The music sounds a bit like Final Fantasy (an old favorite). How do you add music to these postings? Write on!
Ted

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
SC.....I really loved this one
beautiful...I admire your talent and versitility girl

Walt


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