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Donnie's First Time
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Uncle Charlie wanted Donnie's first time to be special, a memory that would always make him smile.

Charlie had been Delta's regular, she had serviced him for years,
She had filled his drab life with passion and soothed his man fears.
Charlie had called and asked for a favor today,
He asked if Delta would give his nephew, Donnie, his first lay.
Charlie wanted Donnie's first time to be a sweet memory,
He said," I don't want it to be a just get through deal, like it was with me!"
Delta smiled at the thought of teaching a fledgling how to fly,
She agreed to Charlie's request and then said good-bye.
Later Delta heard a timid knock on her door,
She opened it to find a beauriful boy named, Donnie, who had arrived promptly at four.
He held his head down, he was so shy, looking ar rhe floor,
Delta cooed," Don't be scared Baby", he confessed," I have never done this before!"
She tilted his chin up and smiled into his eyes of blue,
She spoke softly, explainin what they were about to do.
Then she exposed her pink and white breasts sayin," Baby these are all for you."
His eyes fairly popped out and then he started to grin,
Before too long he just waded right in.
Delta knew how to calm down the eagerness in the young man,
She gently let him know she was in command!
She kept her hands firmly on the reins, though the colt wanted to run,
She taunted and teased, making sure he was having fun.
She whispered," Take it easy, Baby, we've got all day,"
" Yore Uncle Charlie brought you here to get a truly fine lay!"
Delta applied protection with expert ease,
While trailin sensuous kisses, bringing quivers of pleasure, making him weak in the knees.
She ignored all his beggin and his" Pretty Pleases",
Her lips, tongue and hands, sucked, stroked and delightfully teased.
She whispered," Baby, yore first time out, you are experiencin lovin from the best",
" I will always stand out in yore memory, head and shoulders above all the rest!"
Then Delta mounted him and began their ride,
She moved back and forth, on the golden slide.
When she felt the dam about to break,
She slowed the tempo, for his sake.
Soon they were trippin the light fandango, soarin in fantasy's flight,
Donnie moaned in sweet release, all was so right!
As Uncle Charlie waited patiently outside,
Delta held Donnie in her lovin arms as he cried!

Music: Love Me Tender

 

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 Reviews of "Donnie's First Time"
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
Beautifully said and felt of 1st time love, in the arms of someone caring!
When someones really cares, they must give their BEST in loves tenderness!
A write that is exquisite!
Warmly, Warrior Gypsy Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2007
It just aint right, Uncle Charlie and Donnie gettin some and
me none.
Your a special writer SC..
Huggin and Somethin
Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
i hope it was tears of happiness ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
You surely know how to weave a good one. This is superb SC..a fantasy come true for any young stud.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Most definitely a man's favorite fantasy!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Ditto Kathy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
I think this every male's fantasy - young or old. The BEST.

Truly a sensual poem.

Kathy

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
SC, always lending a helpig hand I'm never to old to be taught something new,and I'm old enought to know there is still a lot to learn, from deciated teachers in all facets of lovin and living,
stan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
I was thinking about reaching the end, what if the boy had said, "haven't got no uncle Charlie, and my name ain't Donnie"
But that just the little devil me.
Georg

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
This is nice, with a twisted ending that leaves the readers pondering. I love the sensuality of this one.

Sandie May Angel :o)


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