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Birthday Tanka
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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My first try at a Tanka. Tell me how I did if you do not mind! Foxxy is my dog.

Foxxy loves her Mom.
Laying on floor,playing toys.
Her birthday is here!
My birthday is in three days,
I hope to get many things!

Written June 2nd, 2004 9pm CST
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Reviewed by Timothy Houlahan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2004
I know I rang but I forgot to say " Happy Birthday Darlin,so Happy Birthday.

Love you. XO
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
don't know much about this form. But this is really cute.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 3, 2004
And I hope you do, and a great year ahead, full of health. Encore...
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
Rebecca, you have the form nailed...
You did very well for a first try, so keep it up.
This is a delightful read.
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
Wonderful description. I can see Foxy... I'll bet she is hoping to get a lot of things too... lol. Was Foxy a prior birthday present?
Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on June 2, 2004
I think it is very well done for your first tanka...
fun subject

I look forward to more :)
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