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Ocean Waters-Senryu Chain 5-7-5
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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Decided to be inspired by Karla's piece and thus wrote this little piece myself! Hope you enjoy! Comments are welcome! Good or bad!

Ocean Waves come,
they ride tides into shore.
Sand Castles I make.


 


The beaches are fun.
It is nice to sit and just
relax by the shore.


 


Nothing to do but
bathe in the sun for hours.
This is the summer!


 


Written by Becca P (Henry) Lang on April 28th, 2005 at
7:47pm CST, DST. All rights reserved!




 
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 Reviews of "Ocean Waters-Senryu Chain 5-7-5"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2005
Nicely done.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 4, 2005
A beauty.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2005
Beautiful Fun and Peaceful.
Summertime and all that it was made for in your poem
Bravo!
Thanks for this great big smile.
Guess I'd better get the beach ball and towels, ice chest fill it w/ goodies and get myself to the California Ocean beach.
In the mood now thanks to YOU!
Thanks Becca.
Hope you're feeling great.
Take it easy and Have Fun!
Traceyxo(c:)
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Reviewed on May 2, 2005
Becca,

Enjoyed immensely!! Exceptional poetry!!


Blessings my friend,

Robert
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on May 1, 2005
this just makes you want to get away. exceptional.
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on April 29, 2005
Cool, I can't wait for the summer days.

Best wishes
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 29, 2005
Beautifully done Becca! Enjoyed the summer to come...

Eileen
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