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Your Beautiful Eyes
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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I met someone on the train yesterday!


As my radio
plays in morning
hours, I settle into
my routine.


As I drive downtown,
mirror imaged pooled
reflections of the sun
against the high
rise towers in Ft, Worth
remind me of your
hazel eyes.


Written by Rebecca (Becca) Lang on
March 22, 2007 at 3:19pm CST, DST.
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 Reviews of "Your Beautiful Eyes"
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Becca, this is very beautiful, very scenic, and so soft and romantic too. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
this has a wonderful feel to it ... nice pen, Rebecca ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
What is that song? "What a difference a day makes?" Nice.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Sweet moments nicely shared, Becca. Eyes do tell so much. I think that is why many people will avoid looking you in the eye. Thank you. Love and peace always,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
You have captured such a special truth here, Becca, that it takes extra-special eyes to see. We can see all things in everything if we live and love enough. The world is a wonderful place and all things live and breathe together, whether animate or inanimate. I love the inter-reciprocity in this. "mirror imaged pooled reflections" is so descriptive and almost sounds onomatopoeic for what you're seeing... if that makes sense! Striking and penetrating, bless you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
You are such a romantic Becca and this write does wonderful justice to love at first sight. Well done.
hUgs
FEe

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Mysterious hazel eyes, Becca...it's good to see you posting again...what a beautiful last paragraph of reminder...

"mirror imaged pooled
reflections of the sun
against the high
rise towers in Ft, Worth
remind me of your
hazel eyes."

Sage

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Becca...good pen...keep your focus on those loving and beautiful eyes.

Thanks
Dan


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