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Rebekah Rosie Lang

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Raw
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Everything WAS ok,
Then, muscles ache,
Cough a great deal.
Sleep more and more.
Sniff all the time.
Sound like the Flu?
I have been taking
medicine for nose,
muscles and throat
everyday since
September 1st,2003!
I do not
understand and I am
JUST PLAIN TIRED!

I WANT TO GO TO SLEEP

BUT CANNOT!

HELP!

Written October 12th, 2003 at 11:25pm

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Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
Becca sorry to hear this hope and pray it will doon pass,I hate illness!Keeping you in prayer...

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
(((Becca))) Hope you get to feeling better soon!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
Hope you feel better real soon, Becca...
Hugs...Jenni

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
Hope you feel better described me a week ago.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
I'm so sorry you're going through all this crap, Becca... Please don't give up, reading your blogs and poetry shows me a strong, life-appreciative spirit who has a great thirst for learning. :) I'm pulling for you, keep up your regimen of meds, poetry and perceptive acuity.

Reviewed on October 13, 2003
I think Lisa was right. You're probably having some allergies attack. This will pass.

I had a flu a few weeks ago, it lasted for 9 days. Was in bed for a few days with muscle and bone and head aches. I still have not got over this completely yet.

Hope you'll be feeling better soon. I'm glad you're making a poem out of this misery.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
This sounds like the same crap that I've had. To sleep, not cough and try to dream, lol, I took those night-time gel caps, I think it was Nyquil or maybe the off-brand. Hang in there sweets.

Love, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 13, 2003
Becca, Since you are in the great state of Texas, I would say it is a form of ragweed or cedar fever! It's that time of year here. It will pass,,just like the seasons. Great rant! Lisa

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
Nice write on what ails Becca...tonight though, you will sleep the sleep of angels and when you awake, no longer any medicine will you have to take. For all is well.
Take care,
Allen

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2003
Oh I hate it too Becca getting sick and then loosing sleep you did this well.
Taylor


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