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No Redemption
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when it's over . . .

© 2005 RDLarson

No redemption

By

RD Larson



He knows his fractured death,

Lies so very near indeed.

He keens to carry on, blinded

By the shadow of his bleed.

Glitter hangs in shreds

Once he stood, man-seed,

Now he crumples, falls

Curled now in fetal need

That falls to fatal curl



 


© 2005 RDLarson

 
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 Reviews of "No Redemption"
Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on April 29, 2004
I have to agree this is sad but inevitable. I like the way you write it.
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
Wow! Right up my alley, RD! Wonderful sense of futility, frustration and fatigue!! :)
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on September 8, 2003
Hi RD:

Yes, I agree with Carmen. This was sad. Wish it didn't happen that way.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o(
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
This is so sad. But it is true. We hang on to the end, as we watch it all fall about. Good write, RD. It left me speechless. I guess this is one I'll read again, and again.

Carmen
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