Tell Me (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

Love this poem Amber -Viv-
I'll tell you, to never stop writing!
So much is said in these lines!
So much is felt between the lines!
every relationship needs and must go both ways...
I feel a sense of determination! filled with deep longing passion!
Warm hugs and love, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeooxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

I mam going to tell you something Amber
this is one beautiful write
well penned
peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

A very intense need to love and be loved, expressed so beautifully Amber.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

A beautiful write of love, the expectation of love, and hope for continued love.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

Beautiful write, Amber, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

Questions that we all want answered when we love someone and yet the uncertainty of that love shadows our minds and hearts. Often it is because of past experience and it is only with time that a new love can prove the past is not the present. Lovely write Amber.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

And what...if I may ask, will you tell back?
Like a bee, from flower to flower, this poem takes drops of literary nectar to the aching soul.
Georg

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on November 15, 2007

The answer is already written in the wind...when you believe in the spirit of love. Such a beautiful piece filled with passion's intensity.
Amor

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on November 14, 2007

yes I like the way you wrote this a lot as well

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 14, 2007

L o v e l y. Love the clever way you have used repetition, and the passion with which you write. Thanks! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 14, 2007

It has to be a two-way street for it to work. And, of course someone has to be the first to make the pronouncement of love. If he doesn't get the picture and understand how much he's loved, well ...

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 14, 2007

A beautiufl poem of yearning to hear what your heart feels returned to you...I'm sure he will tell you;-) Lovely work!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 14, 2007

The heart pulls the words out and the plead is evident. Just beautiful in a pleading heart...within your words.
Love and blessings!
Susan