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Our Independence Day (A collaboration)
by Amber V Moonstone → (All Poetry by Amber V Moonstone)
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Finally another joint effort to bring the den a romantic collaboration between two golden pens of romance!!!


Poem Artwork


  "Our" Independence Day
(Collaboration)

BY

William “D’Artagnan” Bonilla

&

Amber “V” Moonstone

07/04/09

 

~*William*~ 

 

Last night I heard

What I thought was rolling thunder

At a distance,

Then realized it was

Our Independence Day.


From afar Into the darken sky

I saw the stars bursting

Comets falling from the heavens

“Ambers”

Fading in the night skies

Lighting up my mind

A tear flow from my eyes

Again wanting poetry in defiance

As our country did with

The Brits.


Only in our time at the now

The defiance were passionate desires

To be scribed by golden quills

Setting the skies on fire

By writers desperately

Seeking balance to bring to life

Literary fire

Now cooking in a mine

In flamed with wanton Expressions

Of thoughts

Created deep in Hearts and souls

Before they expire.

 

~*Amber*~

 

The crash of the fireworks,
the brilliance of the lights
sends my mind toward you.

 

Knowing our passion
could be as explosive
as this visual experience.

 

Your scribed words
send messages of
burning passionate longing.

 

Let us re-trace the journey

We have traveled as

Romantic writers

Of the passionate genre.

 

Our craving for eternal love
has been the driving force
of many lonely nights.

On the evening of our country's
Independence Day,
It is with gratitude and thanks
that fills my heart with joy.

 

Never have two golden pens,
graced a more captive audience
as this arena under the
magnificent fireworks of man's desires.

 

We have grabbed our independence

Through surmountable turmoil

Toward bringing our romantic words

Together, as we celebrate
“Our” Independence Day!

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Our Independence Day (A collaboration)"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 28, 2009
I like how you both captured the essence of the day and mixed it with romance. I'm suddenly in love with the celebration of the day. I've not seen fireworks in years, thanks to my schedule. I feel like I just witnessed them here - in imagery and your play off each other. Great writing William and Amber:)
Sheila

Reviewed on July 13, 2009
Beautifully collaboration, Amber and William - gives a whole new meaning to seeing fireworks. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on July 13, 2009
A beautiful collab as always.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2009
Amber, I always enjoy your collaboration poetry that you do with William. Love Holly

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
Wow! You two neon the night with your explosive writes!
May your independence fire, continue to bring us more gems like this!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on July 12, 2009
Oooh, LOVE IT!
Viv and William!!!

WRITE ON!
Purple_Passions, SHEExooo

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
Lovely writing from two wonderful writers...sighhh...have a wonderful and safe day to both off you...Hugss

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Thank You Once again Amber
for co writing thoughts and feeling into something
as beautiful as these selective words of passion
Its a pleasure to Cross quills with you,
You never cease to amaze me with your awesome response....
Love & Peace be with you eternally

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
The two of you came together and...the earth was shaking moving!

Georg


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
wonderful collaboration! liberation is indeed something to celebrate ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
....explosive,,so glad to see you two finally doing a collaboration...as you top the charts in it's beauty and passion...where is that book?
love,Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Sounds like unity of spirit molded this collab of writing magic into a bittersweet love song.
very nice indeed

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL DUAL ACCOMPLISHMENT THAT ENHANCES THE MEANING OF THIS WRITE; A LOVE FOR INDEPENDENCE DAY AND FOR THE GIFT THAT LIES WITHIN EACH OTHER. THE IMAGERY IS VIVID AND TANTILIZING WHILE SUPPORTING THE THEME SOLIDLY. BLESSINGS. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on July 10, 2009
and I observe such beautiful adornments of emotions passionate poetry bursting into the hearts of our den!!
Lovely Collob William & Viv!!
Peace, Love & Endless Expressions of Independance! Wahoo!!! :)
Vickie


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