Render Me Helpless (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2009

well...if you insist :-)

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 19, 2009

Render ME Helpless, sounds like a song!
A beautiful mystical song!
I love the passion, beat and your heart within this short powerful intense sensual lines Viv!

WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo
May your soul feel this! as you wrote it!

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on August 12, 2009

A beautiful picture of sensual ecstasy on a romantic moonlit night!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 12, 2009

What warm and sensual romance you pen Amber. Steamy and beautiful.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 11, 2009

You brought the picture to life. Passionate and sensual. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2009

A passionate, remarkable soul has written this...In admiration, love Holly

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

'render me helpless!' love it, Amber, very sweet!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

So passionately enthralling, Amber. Sweet!!! Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 9, 2009

All I can say Amber is, Holy Cow!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

i suspect more than your senses would be tantalized ;)

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

THE RHYTHM AND IMAGERY IN THIS 'STRONG PHRASED' WRITE IS COMPLETELY WONDERFUL. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Amber , WOW! No guessing needed,plain and simple! Your passion is alive and well!Superb write!

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

No beating around the bush here; candid concubinage!

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Excellent read here. Very provocative. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Wow - what a most powerful moon, it must be.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

The moon's passion did this?..Wow...darn I need to check out that moon tonight...lol...this is well, I am with Karen...melted my coffee mug....full of fire and passion.
love
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Wow, Amber, this is HAWT!! I think you melted my glasses with this 'un! Holy Toledo! LOL GREAT write of fiery passion; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Amber someone touched a match to your passionate side and it flared up to burn out of control in this sensual poem of want and desire. The eyes perceived, the body craved and the heart fell in love...

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

Nothing will please and engorged more a lover than when she's crying uncle!

Georg

PS. as opposite of faking "it" :-) LOL

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

you sexy spicy woman....GRRrrrrrr.....render them men helpless! :)
and the MOON! Oh My Gawsh....Huge & Glorious the other night, this morning as I type this it is foggy & the moon has a beautiful rainbow sphere around her :)
Peace, Love & Moon Light
Vickie

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

HOT! Guess you mean it! The "turn me over" part just bares your passionate soul, Amber...Render Me Helpless is very persuasive...I like the dire need in this...

Love,
Sage