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Can't Help Myself Jolene
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A Poem Ms Sage Challenged Me To Write In 2006, Reposted For You Sage


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CAN'T HELP MYSELF JOLENE

thanks to Ms.Dolly Parton And Ms.Sage Sweetwater for the inspiration


i thought that i was strong enough
built like a fortress
big and tough
but what man could resist you
Jolene?

with two emerald jewels
disguised as eyes
a body that the gods would prize
and i am just a man of flesh
Jolene

i think about you all day long
and dream of you
when night has come
i’m breaking her poor heart in two
Jolene

she cries and begs me
'please don't go'
but i’m caught in your web and so
i can’t seem to help myself
Jolene

i meet you on the edge of town
when the crimson sun
is going down
and we make the moon blush red
Jolene

soft white skin, deep auburn hair
to your beauty
no other can compare
i’ll lose my soul over you
Jolene

i come home sodden
with your sweet scent
guilty, tired and passion spent
but it’s not love it’s only lust
Jolene

it will only be a matter of time
til with another man
you’ll leave me behind
maybe she’ll forgive me then
Jolene

but until then, on lust i’ll dine
passion drunk
on your sweet love wine
you’re the devil’s favorite tool
Jolene



© 3/8/2006 Don Juan Amante

Song Jolene




 

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 Reviews of "Can't Help Myself Jolene"
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
Don J - YOU write with Passion, but your honesty is soothing!
Great poem for Sages Challenge!
Not sure what she really wanted from you, in a poem but this was a sure prized winner!
YOU EXCEL!

Jolene, is a pretty song too!
So, Jolene could not be tamed! What a shame!

WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passions, SHEExooo
Stay Safe! and God Bless You and Yours!

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Male or female, lust is nondiscriminate. You write this with such passion, warmth and a hint of regret. Awesome!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 23, 2008
Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Don Juan, a perfect match to my Jolene posted in my den. I so love your male-to-female version. You should be writing these as song material, especially yesterday's post Other Cowboy's Get the Best Horses - wonderful commercial lyrics. Thanks for reposting Jolene. This is so special to me. I am honored that you took your valuable time and participated in my challenge back then. Stay just the way you are...your quill is passionate and respectful to women and I acknowledge that. Be well always DJ.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Love, love, love this, Don - no man can help himself when he meets Jolene - as he does in this write - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 22, 2008
You've done Dolly Parton (and Sage) proud with this challenge, Don! Superb! "Jolene" is one of my very favorite songs!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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