I thought you got the hose last week - you did? Well, it's time for another cooling down!
But seriously, DJ, this poem has all the features of great writing and great intimacy - the progression from 'my lips capture yours' (how good that is!) to 'my tongue is whispering love poetry...' vividness, eroticism and passion...especially passion.
Yes!
DJ, You are an artist and lover beyond imagining. I am in awe of your ability to touch the places in a woman's soul that want to reach out and touch back.
Some how, for some unknown reason, I can feel exactly what you have written as if it was happening to me. Wow, that was incredible!
Peace, love, and the power of lightness,
Amber
(ps. I have used this photo on one of my poems it is quite sensual isn't it!)
A young widow joins her aunt’s house-restoration project in the wilderness, determined to take a stand for independence, but two men have different plans for her—and so does God.
But seriously, DJ, this poem has all the features of great writing and great intimacy - the progression from 'my lips capture yours' (how good that is!) to 'my tongue is whispering love poetry...' vividness, eroticism and passion...especially passion.
Yes!
John
Some how, for some unknown reason, I can feel exactly what you have written as if it was happening to me. Wow, that was incredible!
Peace, love, and the power of lightness,
Amber
(ps. I have used this photo on one of my poems it is quite sensual isn't it!)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.