I thought you got the hose last week - you did? Well, it's time for another cooling down!
But seriously, DJ, this poem has all the features of great writing and great intimacy - the progression from 'my lips capture yours' (how good that is!) to 'my tongue is whispering love poetry...' vividness, eroticism and passion...especially passion.
Yes!
DJ, You are an artist and lover beyond imagining. I am in awe of your ability to touch the places in a woman's soul that want to reach out and touch back.
Some how, for some unknown reason, I can feel exactly what you have written as if it was happening to me. Wow, that was incredible!
Peace, love, and the power of lightness,
Amber
(ps. I have used this photo on one of my poems it is quite sensual isn't it!)
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
But seriously, DJ, this poem has all the features of great writing and great intimacy - the progression from 'my lips capture yours' (how good that is!) to 'my tongue is whispering love poetry...' vividness, eroticism and passion...especially passion.
Yes!
John
Some how, for some unknown reason, I can feel exactly what you have written as if it was happening to me. Wow, that was incredible!
Peace, love, and the power of lightness,
Amber
(ps. I have used this photo on one of my poems it is quite sensual isn't it!)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.