If I Could, You Know I Would (poem) by Don Juan Amante on AuthorsDen

If I Could, You Know I Would
by Don Juan Amante → (All Poetry by Don Juan Amante)
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``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` i want to be what you want me to be i want to touch you in the night i need to feel your hand in mine turn all your wrongs into rights and if i could, you know i would take all your load on my back i�d be your beast of burden we�d love without looking back i want to walk with you at twilight i want to wake with you at dawn want to give my strength and passion until all your fears are gone and if i could, you know i would turn back the cruelty of time and if i could, i'd take you now and make you wholly mine i want to kiss away the cold years feel flesh melding so sublime i want to taste the nectar of your love and fill you with the heat of mine and if i could, you know i would hold you tight in my arms i�d pay the awful price of love to keep you safe from harm just want to be what you want me to be want to touch you in the night want to keep you so close to me make your whole world alright DJA 5/30/2010 ��

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

PASSION AND DESIRE...TASTEFULLY DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS, LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

I need to get up and walk around (cool off) after that one!
Very nice poem, Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

This is rich therapy, DJ, with both the quality of love poem and of prayer, and has a warm wrap-around feeling.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY ROMANTIC, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 30, 2010

DJ, You have hit head on the nail with this one...You definitely are a sexual healer..This is going to ring true and be felt by most everyone that reads this...It is fantastic!!!!Sensual but tender, and above all certainly inspired!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber