there is a moment, crystallized in my soul
i glimpsed you floating there, on a placid lake
like a pale lotus at twilight opening to the moon
your cool petals unfolding to the hot kiss of night
your fragrance carried on the wings of the wind
heart inviting the wanderer to rest in your arms
and savor the fruited ambrosia of a woman’s love
hidden within the crevices of her plump desire
a moment in time when two spirits found refuge
in intense deluge of our present storm, eclipsing
half forgotten monsoons that once drenched us
in the years before loneliness claimed our hearts
and i had transformed into your entranced voyeur
watching from the misted shadows of your dreams
as you dropped all the veils from your yearning
and they floated away on the waters of surrender
DJA 10/3/2010
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Reviews of "A Moment In Time"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2010
There should be more men like YOU upon this planet..aaaaaaaaah
I am floating like a pale lotus, drifting in your magical loving words taking me to places that only you can do.
always leaves me breathless, so full of romantic words and passionate verses dripping with the sweet ambrosia of your golden pen!
your romantic presence opens further
and further inside you poetry
your poetic voice is truly beautiful
I love to read your poetry
and moreso the feeling & the embrace of it
Splendid piece..
Vesna
You certainly know how to get a girl's attention!
Very beautiful.
Ragno Donna
always leaves me breathless, so full of romantic words and passionate verses dripping with the sweet ambrosia of your golden pen!
I guess I really loved this poem..lol
Peace, love and light.
Amber
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
In admiration,
John
and further inside you poetry
your poetic voice is truly beautiful
I love to read your poetry
and moreso the feeling & the embrace of it
Love's Fragrant Bouquet
Vickie
Warm Wishes,
Christine
Regis