is it you with your come-on smile
and sexy eyes that pry open my soul
with the tyranny of such temptation
from red lips able to tempt bacchus?
is it the scent of your silken hair
the perfume that rises to greet me
from the valley of your round breasts
that has captivated my imagination?
did you know that i imagine you
supine on warm white sand beach
or stretched out decadently exposed
in the middle of my big brass bed?
where you open your garden gates and
invite me to inhale the fragrance of love
i have often kissed your fevered flesh
and caressed the portals of your dream
is it hot in here, or is it just you?
DJA 11/9/2010
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Reviews of "Is It Hot In Here?"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2011
Oh my ....smokin hot..whewwwwww I think it must be the two of us huh...Giggless..as alwayssssssssssss super HOT sweet DJ
Share
Print
Save
Follow
lustful fire starter
kindlier of the flames
impassioning desires...
Very sensuous and passionate poem.
Mary
Such a question deserves an answer, Yes it is hot in here, and it isn't just me, it's you too!
Do you really have a big brass bed? I would love to have my garden gates opened and share the fragrance of love...
Wow, you really know how to get me..Yes now it's really hot in here.
Come to my cocoon of sleepy dreams and find out just how hot it is.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
How well you write!
John
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Blessings,
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.