The Mathematics of Love –Haiku (2 equations) (poem) by Peter J. Oszmann on AuthorsDen

The Mathematics of Love –Haiku (2 equations)
by Peter J. Oszmann → (All Poetry by Peter J. Oszmann)
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(2 formulae for true lovers)

Equation 1. (The Ideal) ♥+ ♥= Uni of 2 (fine souls in) O [Where O {being a circle}= on = infinity = eternity] Love plus love equals Union of two fine souls In eternity Equation 2. (The One Closest to Reality) Love equals pain, hurt, Trials, tribulations and Much compromising. © P. J. Oszmann (2003) © Illustration created in Publisher & Photoshop (2004) You can choose which of the two equations appeals and applies to you. Of course there is room for more equations… with more compromises… I suggest that, in practice, you need the combination of both equations… with plenty of compromises. Try… just try… and put it into practice!… not just into empty words! Disclaimer: In case anyone feels inclined to throw the book at me; I am not a Mathematician… just a humble lover of love… and peace.

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

Yes, I agree, it is a bit of both- took me 33 years to realize that love is work and it is also wonderful and worth whatever you put into it. I put nothing in for years, and that is what I received back- really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

(((peter)))

it adds up perfectly--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

i'm allergic to math, i always say--but not to your poetry (and friendship) :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Excellent write, Peter, but I don't do math. I think I am mathematically challenged; math has always been hard for me. So I avoid it like the plague if I can! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

From a philosopher to a mathematician...you do run the gamut, Peter, but for one minor little thing, you are one syllabel off on the first one, second line (5-7-5 usually for haiku, right?) an easy mistake to make, as I have done so a bunch of times...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

I love the graphics. Great formula.

Equation 1. (The Ideal)