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You are a piece of jewel…
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You are a piece of jewel, deep fiery sapphire.


Maybe you are silver; perhaps you’re shiny gold.


Perchance you are platinum that people admire,


Or precious stone that men desire and want to hold.


 


Maybe you are ruby. In the depth of your eyes


Sparklingly shine every precious stone known to men.


But which one’s you? I can only hypothesize, 


I may venture a guess once and never again.


 


You must be diamond; you can’t be anything less,


One who’s bright sparkle shines aloof and high above…


One that men adore in its cool incandescence


And one, which in its cold pride never learned to love.


 


 


© P. J. Oszmann (January 1952 – in Hungarian; adapted into English 2003)


 


 


Yes, I really met a girl like that… I then married her…  (but that was just a joke), the truth is that:


 


This youthful piece was written approx. 4 years after a painful rejection by a young lady I was “desperately” in love with for about 5 long years and before I met my future wife. The actual “affair”  - 100% innocent by today’s standards, in as much as sex was not even thought of, let alone mentioned – lasted about 4 months, the rest of the 4 years and 8 months or so was just “suffering.” The only constructive and positive element in the whole affair was the birth of approximately 150 poems; some bad, some extremely bad and a few that one could consider passable. The original of the above one I would consider to be in that category. In the resultant English version I kept almost all descriptive elements and imagery intact, but, in order to do so, extended the number of syllables per line from 10 to 12 and omitted the young lady’s name, which was contained (as a form of Acrostic) in the first letter of the first line in each stanzas.


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Reviewed on November 30, 2004
"You are a piece of jewel…" is a jewel for the Poetry's treasure.

I like the combination of precious stones building the glorious imagery. (The author did know the value of rarities then!)

Thank You for posting "You are a piece of jewel…".

Healthy Long Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
This is Beautiful and reminds me of the way the old old times would talk. Ya know when scroll was carried from town to town and "hear ye hear ye" was said. It's really quite a beautiful poem and sad. "Stepping Stones" to better things in life (that one helps me get through my times)
God Bless You and Your family.
Warmest and Happiest of days.
Tracey

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
This is very beautiful,
I enjoyed very much! :)

Reviewed on November 29, 2004
beautiful poem, peter, absolutely lovely! well done, my friend; nice to see you back where you belong! you have been missed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D


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