An Addict’s Epitaph - Senryu (poem) by Peter J. Oszmann on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Poor thing.

Love it!

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 5, 2005

Perfect!!!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 4, 2005

Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on May 3, 2005

so many lose spirit
and walk as zombies

blunt force poetry!!!
love it

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2005

Peter,
Short Sweet Blunt Truthful and right to the Very point of life.

Superb!!!!!
Thanks (c:)
Tracey

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 30, 2005

Peter:

No one can accuse you of being long winded: this hits home like a bullet! Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 30, 2005

Superb Peter, lol...short and to the point.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Saul Logan

Reviewed on April 30, 2005

LOL...that's great...morbid humor and straight to the point...

Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

no matter what anyone tells me, i don't hink i have a problem; i only do it recreationally...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

I know what haiku is, wish I knew what senryu was, as this poem is still a 5, 7, 5 combination so whats the dif...? beyond that it seems we all are addicted to life, & eventually must kick another habit too...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

does RIP mean, Resurrected In order to write Poetry?

Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

I think kicking this addiction would cause some pain...at least those left behind...Where in England is this headstone Peter?

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

I've kicked all of my other bad habits, but I'll never kick THAT habit lol...BTW, what in the world is senryu????

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

Aw, jeez! First of all this is senryu, not haiku. Secondly, you're sick. That's not a bad thing.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

cool...i have an addictive personality but that is one addiction i don't want to kick

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 29, 2005

LOL! Very clever. Where is the stone located?