I went to a place where dreams are born
And I felt that I was just a dream.
But out of dreams often pains are born
And therefore soon I began to scream.
As the pain was not fading away,
I dragged my aching body to bed,
I knew in my dream I lost my way,
So I woke to find out I was dead.
When you're dead it's the end of a dream,
You cast away the body you worn.
I entered a hole; began to scream…
And I was back where the dreams are born.
© P J Oszmann (2008)
© Illustration created in Photoshop (2008)
Footnote:
The above poem was actually borne out of a dream. I dreamt the poem in full, woke up, jotted it down, checked the meter, made minor corrections in only two lines and the poem was completed in less then ten minutes. I've never completed a poem this easily and fast in English. It was too easy I thought, so I decided I had to translate it into Hungarian, which I've never tried before. Hitherto all my literary translating efforts were from Hungarian to English.
The rude awakening… from an easy birth to a breach-birth… without an epidural…
Just like in the dream, I screamed… and now I am back where the dreams are born…
Below is the Hungarian version for whoever can read it…
(I could not fit it in the original meter, three syllabi had to be added to every line… who said Hungarian was an easy language?…)
Ahol az álmok születnek
Oda mentem ahol az álmok születnek,
S úgy ėreztem, hogy egy álom vagyok csupán,
De álmokbol gyakran fájdalmak születnek
Ės igy sikitani kezdtem, pár perc után.
Mivel nem tudott mullani a fájdalmam
Gyötört testem nehezen ágyba cipeltem
Tudtam hogy álmomban elvesztettem utam
S igy arra ėbredtem fel hogy halott lettem.
Aki halott, az az álom vėgėhez ėrt.
A test ės ėlet örömei megszünnek.
Egy mėly lyukba estem, sikitottam ezėrt,
S ott lettem megint, hol az álmok születnek
© P J Oszmann (2008) (Translated from the English original)
Do you dream in English? I actually thought that one would never forget about the mother tongue and this would always come through in sutuations which are beyond our control.
Love
very much enjoyed!!
And I thought StormDreams were intense! Holysmokes...very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Regis
Most wise depicting of living-live-dead dream of life...
"Where dreams are born - (Ahol az álmok születnek)".
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Saving this beauty to read again and again!
Stay safe
Ron