Somewhere… a light mist the sleepy meadow shrouds,
Somewhere… the wind chases pure white frizzy clouds,
Somewhere… gently tolls a melancholy bell,
Somewhere… a clear voice in lush melody swell,
Somewhere… over the clouds that are soft, fleecy,
Somewhere… above the dark velvet of the sea
the sky winks with millions of starry eyes,
Somewhere… up the air a sweet fragrance arise,
Somewhere… softly, tenderly trembles the air…
Spring… sweet new virgin spring awakens… Somewhere…
© P. J. Oszmann (1953 in Hungarian. Translation 2004.)
(Originally written as an allegorical verse, expressing yearning for freedom from tyranny.)
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To give an idea about the difficulty of translating a poem, whilst trying to preserve the imagery as well as the style, the form and turn of phrase, I enclose the original with two working translations below which preceded the verse above.
The original
Valahol… Lágy szėl leng az alvo táj felett
Valahol… a szellö üz bodros felleget
Valahol… halkan kong egy mėlabús harang
Valahol… lágyan zeng egy ėdes tiszta hang
Valahol… selymes felhöfoszlányok között
Valahol… a tengernek bársonya fölött
Száz kis csillag szemėvel hunyorgat az ėg
Valahol… lágy illattal tellik meg a lėg
Valahol… a szellö ugy remeg, ugy dalol…
Tavasz…ėdes uj tavasz ėbred… valahol…
The first word-by-word translation
Somewhere… soft wind floats above the sleepy landscape
Somewhere…a breeze chases frizzy clouds
Somewhere… quietly rings a melancholy bell
Somewhere… softly sings a sweet clear voice
Somewhere… amongst silky, fleecy clouds
Somewhere… above the velvet of the sea
with hundreds of little starry eyes winks the sky
Somewhere… with soft fragrances the air fills
Somewhere… a breeze so trembles, so sings
Spring… sweet new spring awakens… Somewhere…
The first translation adjusted for equal number of syllables for each line
Somewhere… above sleepy meadows soft breeze floats
Somewhere… the wind chases pure white frizzy clouds
Somewhere… a melancholy bell gently tolls
Somewhere… a clear angelic voice softly sings
Somewhere… amongst the soft silky, fleecy clouds
Somewhere… above the dark velvet of the sea
the sky winks with millions of starry eyes.
Somewhere… the air fills up with soft fragrances
Somewhere… how the air current trembles and sings
Spring… sweet, new, virgin spring awakens… Somewhere…
Not really, but he was demanding!
think spring is here in texas--nearly 80 degrees, love it
but winter is fixin to come back--our highs by next week IF we're lucky--low to mid 40s
rude shock to the system
love this beautiful poem, in hungarian or english--BRAVO, well done!
(((HUGS))) and may 2004 bring you only good things
karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and mcuch love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Happy New Year's; may 2004 be your best year EVER! :D