Talk to me when we"re together,
For there is nothing else we share.
Understand me when you're here,
For there is no one else to care.
Give me a reason to stay,
Please don't let me sway.
Don't show me your sympathy,
I just need someone to understand me.
Don't let me feel this way,
Emptiness in silence will make me walk away
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Reviewed by Lyndsey Nelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
Short a sweet. Very nice. Thank you. Truth be True-Lyndsey
Reviewed by Caroline Purple (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2007
An interesting poem about the misuse of silence in a relationship. There is a positive side to silence and meanigful silences are as important as negative silences. Azlina has brought into perspective the downside of silence, a potent and reaching poem.
Azlina, how very nicely you pointed out for us all one of the prime difficulties in troubled relationships: Lack of communication. We men are especially negligent in this area. And how true it is that we all need someone to listen to us, hear our views, learn what "makes us tick," and also someone we can share the world with.
Communication takes place in many ways other than words. What is nicer than to walk slowly through a lovely garden and share the wonders of God's creations, perhaps sniffing a scented rose together?
Welcome to AuthorsDen. Having enjoyed "Silence," I look forward to more of your postings.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
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Communication takes place in many ways other than words. What is nicer than to walk slowly through a lovely garden and share the wonders of God's creations, perhaps sniffing a scented rose together?
Welcome to AuthorsDen. Having enjoyed "Silence," I look forward to more of your postings.
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nice work.....
enjoyed.....Art Sun...