New Moon (poem) by Michelle M Mead on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Silent Dream

Reviewed on April 20, 2008

Beautifully rendered. Soft and soothing. I enjoyed reading! ;)

((Hugs and LOve))
~SilentDream

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

Exceptional style and rhythm, like a balm to the soul...Jerry

Reviewed by James Blaylock (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

I'm quickly becoming a huge fan of your wondrous work.

jkb

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on April 11, 2008

...beautiful quiet quality...glistens in this pen lifted by the clouds...
excellent Michelle...
John

Reviewed by Kathy Kopp

Reviewed on April 10, 2008

Just beautiful, Michelle. I like your four-line stanzas, especially when the last word in a line could apply to the first word in the next line/stanza. I mean, "Angels hushed now/ in prayers we start". And no punctuation, great! How pure, simple and peaceful this poem is without commas or periods. Peace, Kathy

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2008

This write is very sensual, certainly touched my heart. Keep it up. Enjoyed.

Sanja xo

Reviewed by Seed4ever D.

Reviewed on April 10, 2008

Lovely write Michelle I agree with all of the coments below nice well done Seed4ever

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Reflective and very well done.Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

cradle the moon
like you make me alive
cradle the moon
where you touch me inside <---- Top notch. this sounds like the May Queen singing with glee in her heart.
So much here from a mind so very learned and deep. You see so much in the wee incidentals, bringing them to life....

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Has a beautifully hushed and reverential tone, Michelle: full of both wonder and stillness. Such poise, equilibrium and grace. A real sense of time and clouds passing, and much emotional traffic between what the eyes witness and the heart reveals. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Oooh lured me in and I love this piece. The verses weave magic and my imagination soars. In gratitude forever for caring and sharing this beauty. Mikii

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Incredibly intriguing....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Michelle,
What a lovely poem. You have said so much here. I loved the stanza:
"cradle the moon
like you make me alive
cradle the moon
where you touch me inside"

I can feel the moon energy in your words!!!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Oh this is so good, beautiful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

You captured a beautiful picture that pulls you in!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Once more you have completely drawn me into your expression, Michelle. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Your words captured such amazingly beautiful
Spiritual reflections
I always love anything that is the moon
or angelic!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and joy...Morning Star

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Lyrical. . .Reflecting
Smooth and polished
Second read was more like singing it.
Doug

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

nicely done!!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Word for word Michelle, your poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Lovely poem, stronger than the title, in my opinion. I love that second stanza and the evocative end.

Axilea

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Beautifully written Michelle. Well done my friend.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

'Cradle the moon, when you touch me inside'......'Awake from a green sea in hours too long.'----- Beautiful, I like this sentences!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva