Beautifully written!
Loved it!!!
So much emotion in this poem and it's written in a way that I could see it all in my mind as if I was standing there. So romantic... just beautiful.
I have never seen the picture, but I can visualise it fully through your words... I would LOVE to see whether, in fact, it matches in any way. You have an amazing talent, Michelle, for strong visuals and grounding in place with so few words. Yet you maintain an ethereal feel and a spiritual lightness. You are an artist of the highest sensitivity and calibre. The concept of "the painter who paralysed words into swollen interludes" is drop-dead gorgeous. I beleive you feel words deeply. You don't search for words that express your feelings, you express the words that conjure with accuracy what you feel. The results are always spectacular. Bless you, Kate xx
"Windy Day" is beautiful. I love the nature in it and the "romance of shifting storms". What a great metaphor. Also liked the one about "the painter paralyzing words into swollen interludes". These are some expressions I haven't heard before and their origionality is wonderful.
I always smile when I see that you've written something new...there's so much beauty in everything you write...and this is no exception. That fifth stanza...exquisite!
Beautiful and surreal, you make the words almost alive and dancing...
Winnie The Poohs kinda blustery day..(grand adventure).... no-one beats me at Pooh sticks....
and you wore my perfume <---- No that was our secret, just don't tell about the high heels and Vic's secrets panties....... Magical to see yer posting, hope all is in fine fettle...x
the night came
and dragged
you away <--- lovely words...
Thoroughly lovely as per your usual creativity, Michelle. Coincidentally, today is a windy day here, one that seems to make the sun dance in the blue sky. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and my very best sentiments to you,
Loved it!!!
So much emotion in this poem and it's written in a way that I could see it all in my mind as if I was standing there. So romantic... just beautiful.
Michal
from your
faded whispers
i fell in love
with the wind
that day-
WOW! My kind of stuff!!! Silver words from a silver mind. MORE!
Sanja xo
A poem that stirs the senses...
ET
Be always safe,
Karen
Winnie The Poohs kinda blustery day..(grand adventure).... no-one beats me at Pooh sticks....
and you wore my perfume <---- No that was our secret, just don't tell about the high heels and Vic's secrets panties....... Magical to see yer posting, hope all is in fine fettle...x
the night came
and dragged
you away <--- lovely words...
Regis
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.