Palms and cold cheeks
pressed against the condensation
of winter windows-
"If only I didn’t love him so," she said.
"Too young a woman to be his baby girl."
But no-no, no, no-
she knew they were all wrong about things
like sixteen years a lover’s albatross when really
it counted for nothing in the age of the souls-
the length of love and the capacity of hearts-
as if she didn’t wake every day with a heart full to bursting
with a love for him that she knew would never end-
as if her feelings were jacks and marbles
waiting to be tossed and caught,
rolled and traded,
on sidewalks trodden upon by lesser lights-
no one could tell or know of her torture defined
in the impossibility of separating this one as two
(soft petals from hard stems)
and yet they handed her red paper hearts
with white lacy edges with names
she never wished to hear
printed on them in block letters
but too young to know
but no one could deny
she loved so completely
till the day they both died
Edwin
Axilea
Love,
Becca~
Outstanding poetry!
Blessings,
~Linda
Be always safe,
Karen
xoRegis
Sandie Angel :o)
Newfie hugs, Rose
Ron
hugs
Fee
"...as if her feelings were jacks and marbles waiting to be tossed and caught," is absolutely splendid and for me the central image of this great poem. I see a more fluent style here than in previous work and I admire it very much.
John
Every line.
Doug
I love that opening sequence - and the rest of this beautiful, poignant piece - a masterwork inspired by an artistic great. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.