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Pleasantly Caught In The Present
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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should i have
could i have
someone help me please

the 'could haves' bring on melancholy
the 'shoulds' shove me to my knees

a personal dilema
to others it matters naught
my heart shuffles through the answers
safe...in the present i am caught

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Pleasantly Caught In The Present"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 18, 2010
Oh, if I had known. Even if we know the future, the present may prevent us from acting on it.

I think you are stuck in a good place.

Ron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 14, 2010
Woulda, Shoulda, Coulda, the three blind mice of life's past who are great Monday morning quarterbacks. Throw the ball otherwise you'll get sacked. Patrick

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 14, 2010
Pat, thought provoking, I agree with David's assesment.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on July 13, 2010
A thought provoking poem Pat, don't worry about the 'should haves, or 'the could haves' the present in which you are caught is all that really matters...this is your future 'will do's' and 'have done's"
warmest wishes,
David

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 12, 2010
Wow, such inner turmoil and expressed well...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 12, 2010
Love this! This is mighty Pat~

I say, risk yourself, rather than suffer in silence with hidden desires!
Blessings,
Christine


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