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Last Call Till Closing
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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have the unidentified cream colored buses passed thru your town yet? they have mine...
Big brother's watching sober from the side Give them all doubles I'm providing the ride Ears deafened by promise eyes clouded by greed they trod on each other for their right to have free These sheep unplugged by foul tasting wine board cream colored buses parked waiting in line Black tinted windows driver in ominous black gear no tag on the back with ID or year Others more sturdy call their Father to their side a last ditch decision to choose a safe ride

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Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

WITH ALL THE CHAOS GOING ON IN THIS WORLD IT IS COMFORTING TO KNOW THAT THERE ARE SERIOUS, CARING INDIVIDUALS OUT THERE WHO ARE NOT SEEKING GLORY BUT 'GO THE EXTRA MILE' TO PREVENT TRAGEDIES. NO, I HAVEN'T SEEN THEM BUT ITS GOOD TO KNOW THAT THEY ARE AROUND. THANKS FOR SHARING, PAT. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

That foul tasting wine is the problem, Pat, it'll do it to you every time. Besides, cream-colored buses? You've been gone. Missed ya. I'm still pondering the ominous black gear and no ID, or tags. Methinks there is gonna be a tough ride.

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on April 24, 2011

Saner heads prevail? It happens... Not always, but every now and then.... think this might have been a now, (or maybe a then.)

Thanks Dick

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