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Ashes Of Seduction
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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Slow deliberate cuts of long dark hair

float from his shoulders, barely noticed,

to the cold stone floor of this house

of curtain-less windows

and tables bare of flowers.


For it was an angel's fair voice

that beckoned him through the churning seas

and swirling waves of his distracted discontent.


Seduced once again by passionate parted lips...

deft soft hands caressing his unbridled needs.


Lured by lust and gold-dusted promises

of warm hues and sweet smells of hearth

to her nurturing bosom.


Lured to a home falsley called,

rooms empty of warmth...walls smelling of ash

to a cold empty teat.


He stood clothed and chained in finery

not of his own...

a warrior heart...the bravest soul of a lion

ruled by the fragile yearnings of a cub.


Trust-filled young eyes

and a steadfast faithful heart

are as dissipating smoke

from the embers of destruction...

the ashes of his seduction



 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Ashes Of Seduction"
Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on November 15, 2012
wow...with all due respects i do believe your poetry has seduced me with its words-well done

Reviewed on July 17, 2012
men are built to be so strong, and they are
but woman have the undeniable strength to weaken them
a fabulous offering showing the "Ashes Of Seduction"

Candles Kissed by Mooning Stars
Vickie

Reviewed on April 15, 2012
Wow! I really got into this!! Bravo!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on April 6, 2012
Intensity is woven into each line. One can certainly feel "lured to a home falsely called" (brilliant line). Powerfully written. ~Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on April 4, 2012
This is simply transcending writing-amazing intricate, wise, longing emotional and moving. Such a treasure here. Will read more.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on April 2, 2012
Excellent the use of imagery in this leaving a series of vignettes upon my miagination. Well done.

Reviewed on March 7, 2012
I can smell the walls of ash, this lured me right into every image. Clever. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 7, 2012
Beauty in your portrayal of a warrior heart.
Brilliant piece Pat.
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on March 7, 2012
Wow! Fascinating imagery you've cleverly painted here, Pat!!! Very nicely done!

Anna

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 6, 2012
You write of a universal and timeless theme, Pat. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 6, 2012
A classical, classy write. Smooth and seductive… Drew me in.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 5, 2012
Awesome effect! This is most compelling Pat!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2012
Pat, Love your tittle and how you layed it out...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 5, 2012
Happens every single day, Pat. Men! We give out gender a bad name.


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