Dew Drop Words (poem) by pat medlin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 23, 2013

Your words are captured in the reality of relationships that are the walking dead refusing acknowledgement for far too long. It is like this in too many lives. This is an excellent write that could not have been stated any better than this.

Reviewed by Michael True

Reviewed on September 27, 2013

So many carefully chosen words to say, no words will ever mask or make clear the message of goodbye. May the clarity of these words and your heart guide you to sunnier days. M.True

Reviewed by Lark Pogue

Reviewed on July 15, 2013

You have just put into words my current situation, and this write is almost a year old. It does not get any better than this, tear jerker that it is.
L

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 29, 2012

A well composed piece and a pleasure to read
Love & peavce be with you

William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 29, 2012

The imagery and symbolism that you have used very effectively convey the theme of your poem. Well done, Pat; and thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on October 28, 2012

wow-this is great poetry

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on October 28, 2012

Evaporation. We are no more than the morning dew.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 25, 2012

This is beautiful poetic literature Pat, and very spiritual
for me as I felt The Lord is Narrator & that in itself
is even more priceless to this poem's essence. Your poets voice
is lovely & beautiful, this is so much more than a love poem

Love & Heavenly Balms
Vickie

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Reviewed on August 29, 2012

"...bedlam that is us...." is so descriptive of all relationships.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 29, 2012

Your poem pierced my heart in so many ways~

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

I love the last part..."and are as dew drops falling on a raging fire." Fine writing!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

In the 'write what you know' and it will show adage, you have, and IT DOES! Magnificent lines, Pat. I felt each one of them. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

this is a most heartbreaking write of the pain in two people seperating after love has been shared.
budd

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

A stunning piece of work. Out of pain, sometimes, courage and inspiration for others emerge.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

A poignant, wise, and calmly beautiful poem of deliverance from raging words.

However, I couldn't contain myself, because I do drop words from time to time. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

Pat ~
A heartbreak of words no doubt the dew drops
have flamed the rising fire storm.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

That last stanza is so powerful!!! Awesome writing, Pat.

Anna

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

Pat, Your words are like an angry storm with raindrops
piercing...Enjoyed!

Deborah

Reviewed by Kathleen Janz-Anderson

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

I can hear the gut wrenching in your words. Very well said.

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

Some give us only the sizzle and no substance.
You give us the "whole enchilada," and you set
the page on fire.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

Sorry to know of this situation, Pat, but hopefully both of you will heed this call for leaving in peace. Very hard to do. We want to lash out. To hurt. Hopefully it will not be the case here.

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

This is so painful yet so beautiful. For a moment my heart broke.
Janna

Reviewed by Miss Wisdom (Reader)

Reviewed on August 27, 2012

"words as dew drops falling on a raging fire" Wow!