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i did write it...i did write it
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
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i did write it
i did write it
thank you dear friend
for helpin' me remeber the end
and my words

thank you sue
for remeberin' what i said
those words be outta' my head

but imagine my surprise
my prize
to know i did write 'em
i wrote 'em back in may
of 2003
how could it be
how can i look back & see

over a year ago
don't you know
it do blow
me away
what can i say?

that someone
found what i done
over a year ago
sun of a gun
ain't it fun

hell, i have a hard time
remeberin' today
much less a rhyme
i wrote yesterday
'specially a year away

thank you sue.

if i should
if i could
i'll do a re-post it
"a single star"
ain't really my style
but all the while
it be me
it be who i be
'specially in may 2003

so roast it or toast it
i don't boast it

but thank you sue
for remeberin'
what i due

my ramble
my gamble
my bet
guess i get's what i get

but we do what we due
anyway
thank you
sweet sue

i remember the star
i remember the bar
out ther so far
now i remember that night
the moon light

2 weeks later
my mom died
and i cried
but best i had tried
see ya' later alligator

but that single star
out ther so far
late at night
shinin' so bright
gave me some light
'least for that night
i'm glad i did write
"a single star"
that's what i do

again,
thank you sweet sue

here's the poem
---------------------
a single star


by Steve Patterson
Thursday, May 29, 2003


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a single star
there

in the sky
passin'by
in the night

a single star
there

out there
in the sky
just passin' by
in the night

there & gone
like an old song

a single star
there off so far
but...

you see it still
if you will

that star
passin' by
in the sky

a single star
off out there
so far

night's
just passin' bye






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 Reviews of "i did write it...i did write it"
Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on June 17, 2004
Nicely done. I can understand why she remembers it so.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
Very nice, my sweet friend.

Reviewed by autumn blair-strange (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
that is just what I needed to read,thank-you!I lost my huband/mate in March,and your '...single star...'sure sounds like him...I'm glad you'.. did write it ..'hugs,Autumn

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 16, 2004
Twinkle, twinkle.


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