this is in response
to a review
what do you do
what do you say
anyway
in response
to my word play
dear lady-
i write in lower case
'cause i can't face
the upper case
i use CAPITAL LETTERS
to emphasize
that's when i caPITtalize
and it ain't that i can't spell
it's just my story i tell
oh well
oh hell
it's my poetry
that matters' to me
it's the words & the rhyme
that passes my time
besides i don't type so well
it interputs the story i tell
to have to think
about the Shift key
that not be me
then i sink
into less than my poetry
but thanks for the read
the review
wish you the best
that i do
hope you pass the test
that need
to write
i wish you the best
that you be you
that be true
lower case or UPPER CASE,
you have a case of the well done's,
not many can say this,
nor can many do it better,
you my friend do the best,
you my friend will never be outdone...
Now who gave you a hard time, you write the way you write, you are not writing for them, you are writing for yerself...screw them...LOL! Peace, bro', time to get me a buzz...Ed & rufuz
Reviewed by autumn blair-strange (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2004
i know not who you wrote in response to...but,you just keep bein' you,and just write on 'cuz upper, lower,or in-between ,i like yer individual-ality..and what will be will be..hugs,Autumn
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
you have a case of the well done's,
not many can say this,
nor can many do it better,
you my friend do the best,
you my friend will never be outdone...
Now who gave you a hard time, you write the way you write, you are not writing for them, you are writing for yerself...screw them...LOL! Peace, bro', time to get me a buzz...Ed & rufuz