As the sun’s brilliance sets on this day,
I wrap a vision with a walk on the beach,
you and me holding hands, stealing kisses,
telling of secretes, in the sand we lay
The fog of your breath, on my neck clings,
stirring an intoxication of magic within,
with intruding waves, sweet love we make,
as the night wraps us, with a song it sings
Gently, my tongue touches your chest,
carefree tracing a big letter I ,
followed by the letter L …then an O-V and E ,
then lower…...well you know the rest
Though I have been away for the past few days visiting with a very sick brother to finally get access to internet and read this beautiful poem took my breath away. The sweet tender sensualness of your words linger in the mind and heart long after the poem is read. to know a love like this...no man could ever ask for more.
hugs
fee
sunset and the beach are a combination that fuels the passion within us -- and yours was fueled and ignited red hot Christine -- "the fog of your breath" was obviously incapable or unwilling to extinguish the flame of passion -- you related this steamy romantic interlude to us with crystal clear verbiage my friend -- somewhere about now I should be quoting lyrics from, "The Ring of Fire" -- and love be with -- Jon Michael
:) an awesome conclusion to this sensual love poem Christine!
I utterly love how you did that!
and of course love the very emotional & intimate photo
Love's Bounty
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fee
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This is hot, Christine, chili hot, and so well delivered.
John
and with no help from anyone other than you!
Fantastic job! Love Holly
I utterly love how you did that!
and of course love the very emotional & intimate photo
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Regis
Okay, I admit to a man's viewpoint: After these three verses, I was ready for at least a couple more.
But what's the admonition to stage performers? "Leave them wanting more." On that basis, "Sunset Love" is a rousing success!
Boy, am I glad I dropped by.
Richard
Can have have me a Sunset Love please...lol
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"