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Broken Promise
by Liz Evans → (All Poetry by Liz Evans)
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Somtimes those closest to us are the ones that hurt us the most.

It hurts more than you’ll ever know,
the pain I feel I never will show,

I hide it away push it down inside,
causing my emotions to crash and collide,

time after time I believe what you say,
maybe I’ll learn, maybe one day,

again I smile and say it’s alright,
and try not to cry with all of my might,

but it seems nothing can hurt as much this,
as much as another broken promise.

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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Blimey, I so can relate, it's taken me forever to realise water is thicker than blood...

See ur mail...

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Sometimes it's time to say good-bye...

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
I know the pains of broken promises. It's sad but it happens in life and will continue to happen. The best thing is to be true to yourself. Something that I am now learning to do. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
the pain of a broken promise is very deep as this poem delicately suggests ...

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
Your rhymed couplets in this piece are absolutely beautiful...great flow in this composition..it is lyrical enough to be set to music. Would make an excellent country ballad.
Welcome to the den. I will be looking into more of your work.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
Your words are powerfully emotive and meaningful, Liz. I am certain that many can relate. I know I can. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis


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