Smell of earthen damp reinvigorates me as I linger beside a forest stream. I breathe in again, this time more deeply still, and watch in amazement as tadpoles dart about. They will be frogs one day.
From a distance, tangerine flame rises to dance in indigo sky. In time, it falls again as fine mist veils forest and its trees. Morning and evening the first day no different than this, my day’s respite in deciduous garden.
Morning, the next day. Dateline, Iraq. Yet another gruesome find: body decapitated. Heavy-hearted, I set out for shady haven where world of humankind’s dark devising falls away and true r, deeper streams are tapped. I breathe in fresh aromas, filled with gratitude for Eden’s entry.
Silent offering is shattered by a single gunshot that pierces the heart of every soul that would choose life. Bullet’s unwelcome blast reverberates, like the endless echo of cries rising up, ringing out from earth’s sanctuary soiled again with blood.
I run. To the heart of the forest, I run, for I know though my heart be broken, such savagery might find its home as easily in me. The cool of a summer rainshower mingles with repentant tears. Falling, I catch myself, leave my handprints in wet ground.
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Reviews of "Savage in the Sanctuary"
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2004
Very powerful and thought-provoking... great ending...
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2004
REally leaves one thinking...always a good thing. It is interesting how it feels like snapping from one reality to another in this write. Well-done.
Dawn, again I must say...they depth of your poetry continues to amaze me. This is such an outstanding write. I feel it to the core of my being. Masterfully written.
Allen
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
Imogene, a country-bred girl, longs to make a life for herself in New York City. She joins forces with her former college roommate to start a movie production company in the big city.
Allen
So much is here to take in.
John
Stunning Dawn.......
this struck like a bullet between the eyes--visceral, hard-hitting, heartshattering write--well done
God have mercy on us all--
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *tears tears tears*
running through this fantastic poem Dawn! You are
a gifted writer.
(That pic Emerald lake is Lake Tahoe, my favorite place to go;-)