Startlingly lovely.
The transition in this piece is enjoyable and the emotion is genuine.
You seem to write for release as I do. I admire your work.
B.
Startlingly clear and in bold type: WANTED!! Neither more nor less will do. You are staring unflinching down both gun barrels here, Dawn, and he must be in your sights! If this doesn't rock him to the core, he must already be "dead"! Your focus and concentration are absolute are you last lines speak of being both hunter and prey. Very well done! Like this one a lot. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2004
Oh--I love this! That last line says it all.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2004
Love the close........Great, write......done with class........ty, Dani
The transition in this piece is enjoyable and the emotion is genuine.
You seem to write for release as I do. I admire your work.
B.
Very deep and emotive write, trust you find the wanted man !
Warm hugs
Elga
Love Tinka
A unique knockout ending! Kudo's!