Dawn, you captured and expressed such deep emotion...love lost, love gone bad...the pain and desolation. I like the way you use rain, tree, nature...
Excellent.
Gina
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Allen
Excellent.
Gina
Wonderfully written..
Peter
done in this magical poem! A real treat!;-)