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Sad Eyes, Shrinking Self
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Sad eyes refuse to bear false witness
to who she was. They remain protected
behind many-colored masks she wears.
She has become a ghost, haunted by
visions of her former self.

She is the nested Babushka doll
heart hollowed out, bottled up inside
the replica of the replica
of her shrinking self, original
soon to be mere remembrance.

Her mind has lost its grasp on details:
how the unraveling occurred and
when it first began. There is a face,
his face, and eyes that refused to tell
anything but truth to her.

In a deeper place she understands;
better part of her has gone with him,
and while she prays, longs for his return,
she knows life offers no guarantee,
has taken its toll on her.



 
 


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 Reviews of "Sad Eyes, Shrinking Self"
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
The "self" does shrink and eventually disappear when one holds on to old pains. It has to let go. Awsome poem, Dawn.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
I liked this poem allot Dawn, it just glued me to it, al

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Makes a heart seek shelter

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
The nested Babushka doll? WOW! Great write. Michelle

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
(((dawn)))

you get into the heart of the poet and squeeze the emotions right out--heartbreaking and brilliant writing! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *hope you're okay*

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Nice job...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
I'm stunned by your superb insightful poetry, Dawn.
I just pray that you will remember that YOU are the best part of yourself! No one can take that place. Don't cede any part of you
to someone else, God wants you whole ! You will function best when you make up your mind to determine that you are the sole control of your anatomy! You are so strong now imagine how much stonger when you take full control! Sorry I could'nt help myself;-)Love to you ...Eileen

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
very well done

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
This is sad and I can relate.
Sorrow is part of love and my
question is Why?

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Sad and painful Dawn...
Tugs at your heart strings...
Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Fantastic poem Dawn!!

Sad but good!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Wow! absolutely breathtaking! your artwork only adds to the impact of your words

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Sad write touching very intense deep emotions. EXCELLENT!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
I agree with Dana.....that second stanza floored me!

Top class write.

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
An extremely sad and heartwrenching write, Dawn. The second stanza is extremely powerful.


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