You say much in just a few lines. I like the way you've formatted this poem, and the way you let the focus go from one to the other. I liked this very much.
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
Love Tinka
Carmen :-)
than either of us knows.
You’d like the chance to show me
my soul
and say you don’t remember me
from sometime long ago
i really like these lines ... they flow so well as say so much ....
You are very creative!