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Unleashed
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Made to assume unnatural position
in hellish circumstance,
his spirit’s broken from this
degradation,
humiliation.

Forced to move again: hand here,
leg here. I shall make you as I wish
 you to be seen,
soldier hisses.
Evil traitors,
these liberators.

The two of them stripped naked,
poked, prodded, probed,
nudged with the rifle butt into
flooded cell,
told to sleep sound, well.

The laughter echoes down
an endless corridor of shame
and morning brings
more taunts and jeers,
more horrors, more fears.

Private first class does her job,
follows “orders.” Fingers point
in directions as numerous as
Iraqis stacked,
trusts broken and cracked.

All the prisoner remembers is
the torment of her laughter
trickling through dark dreams. 
He can’t escape  
her smile’s brutal rape

of his soul.


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 Reviews of "Unleashed"
Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Hi Dawn:

A very emotional piece. Too bad they didn't have better supervision at the prison. Some soldiers do what they are told. Others do what they think they can get away with.

By the way, do you think we will ever start up our critique sessions again?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Powerful and sad Dawn!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Powerful and it is horrific. You've captured
that feeling here. Great work for a subject
highly taboo, I know it should be told.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Dawn what a disturbing powerful picture you have painted with your words. It needs no graphic to see the horror!Superb work!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Powerful write here...so very powerful. You said this all so well. This reminded me of such things and humbled me greatly.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 22, 2004
Dawn,

Very sad, to even think of these degradations. The Geneva Convention was establish to prevent such mistreatment of prisoners. I believe anyone caught in such a situation is no better than a Nazi who slaughtered Jewish people and should be tried as war criminals. It may sound harsh but this has to end somewheres. They will deserve all the punishment they get. Sorry to have rambled on so. Very thought provoking write and very well written.

Reviewed on October 21, 2004
This is true and sad Dawn, I wish we were better than that, but I must agree with what Ed said also, They were not beheaded. Human nature being what it is, I guess it was one way to seek revenge.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
A great visual description of this derilection of duty...but it is hard to compare with slow and brutal beheadings...Neither is right, but to which degree is it wrong.....and which should cause more outrage.

EDL


Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 21, 2004
A sad event. Nicely done.


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