And this certainly makes me happy on a day that has more of the spring-like feel of February rather than December, here in (for once!) sunny England! Delightful and evocative, Dawn, and you take us right with you into the shop, right into your memories and into your current mood of the joy of "just being happy!". 'Tis the season to be jolly, fa la la la laa la la la la!!! Hope your frog brolly's singing along! LOL Kate xx
This is sumptuous, Dawn. It is a happy jaunt through memories and a beautiful rainy day. Excellent images. The rhythm of this is like a happy childhood tune; it awakens the soul.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
It would be great flying a kite with you. Thanks for taking me up on the challenge and giving us such a delightful playful write full of fun images. Eileen's right I love this one!
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
This is a beautifully written poem and so easy to understand.
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
I could sense the rain... and the wonder in the shop... and the breeze along the green field and the colors that went swirling through... you go fly that kite, if it makes you happy then that's all that matters... but it's made me happy too ;)
A sumptuous word painting Dawn! Kate will love this! She
has become a pied piper with her flute, and attitude of joy!;-)
It is catching!Hope we all catch it!
Dawn, this piece had me wishing for rain… lol. One can easily drift back in time to those wonderful youthful days when life was truly such a joy to behold. A fantastic frolicking fun filled composition. Thank you for sharing the jaunt down memory lane. Take care and be well.
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Thank you for this uplifting write.
Take care,
Sherry
has become a pied piper with her flute, and attitude of joy!;-)
It is catching!Hope we all catch it!
Walk in peace, Carole
Love Tinka