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Bloody Rivers of Regret
by Dawn Richerson → (All Poetry by Dawn Richerson)
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There are razor blades flying about.
They prick my confidence, nick me
until I’m bleeding silver tears,
until I’m crying bloody rivers
of regret.

Thing is, I forget what this pain’s for,
and I can’t find the door. Four walls,
a ceiling and a floor. There’s no
way out and I can’t stand it
anymore.

No one left to say I’m sorry to;
I’m alone in an empty room with
no way out and no way in, nobody
to care. Screams of silence echo
in my mind.

I’ve already gone, gone, gone away,
just like they left and left their words
so sharp still slicing the air about me.
Why didn’t they just kick me?
I was down,

hurting, heartsick, only halfway here.
I needed somebody to see me, someone
to care. Too weak to lick my wounds,
I pick myself up and watch the clock,
tick tock tick.

This slashing, silent, scissor-like wind
knocks me down again, cuts me
to the quick until I’m bleeding
silver tears, crying bloody rivers
of regret.
 

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 Reviews of "Bloody Rivers of Regret"
Reviewed on December 10, 2004
(((dawn)))

you collapse me with the descriptive power in your words--and the meaning behind the message--EXCELLENT!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 9, 2004
Great write. I love the idea of the "scissor-like wind" in the final stanza.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2004
A powerful write on the emotions of regret.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 9, 2004
The power of regret can consume us if we don't find a way to move above it. Sad and powerfull words, Dawn, well penned.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 9, 2004
Powerful, painfully dark write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on December 9, 2004
Regret becomes a lot of things. Well penned

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on December 9, 2004
Dawn, a painful and sad write of loneliness...left to face the elements of grief all alone.
Very well penned as always.

Lisa

Reviewed by jeanne watson
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
Oh so very painful this regret .... very heavy upon the shoulders.... mind....

.... enjoyed the emotional drain...very effective...nicely done

jeanne

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
This is very powerful, emotional and dark. But, take a look at the last poem you posted.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
Dawn, this is an intense and powerful piece. You have captured the emotion of abandonment well in this write. Your skill is as sharp as the slicing wind you so speak of.

Allen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
an imaginative powerful write

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
surgically precise images!

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
Dawn, you never cease to impress me (not that you need to). Regrets are hard to let go of, and you've captured the essence of them in a masterful way.


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