Out Late (poem) by Dawn Richerson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 19, 2004

a lovely sad write Dawn..

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

(((dawn)))

i love the format of scattered thoughts that combine to make one powerful poem! VERY powerful and shattering emotions vividly expressed. well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Linda Roman

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

sad, but I like... very nice

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Sounds like a continuous strand of unedited thought. And sometimes those make the best little poems. Sad but good, Dawn.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Sad, but exceptional, not just in form, but in substance. A poem that captures the very essence of loss. Another excellent poem, Dawn.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

this is great and i enjoyed the form you used. it flowed very nicely

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Very sad poem, I read it like a speed poem. Very spontaneous write...

D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Sad write Dawn!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

I look to the sky,
in search of lost or
wandering angels.

They are out there - and we must all search on.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

keep hope alive Dawn! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Somewhere, you will find the peace in which you are searching. Though the pain is intense, you behold the strength to endure and overcome.
Touching write.

Lisa

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

I feel sad for you, Dawn. There is no pain as bad as this. I know. But hope is down the road somewhere, with someone or no one.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Outstanding! Form looks like a pregnant woman!;-)?

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

well done, there will always be times when it seems like there will never be a happy ever after...but time can change that perception. ~Z~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Know the feeling :-( Great write!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Oh this is sad-- I like the form of this piece and how you said it.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

how we see ourselves determines the outcome of our aspirations ... how others see us determines the perspective of our motives ... together, they can build a very happy ever after ...