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Shifting Gears
by Dawn Richerson → (All Poetry by Dawn Richerson)
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[Note: I'm working a holiday job with very long hours, so I don't have much time to comment except on weekends. But since I write poetry in my head all day, I'll keep posting. I'll be back on track after the first of the year. Happy holidays, and thanks for your support and encouragement. Dawn]


Bumping,
bruising
test of endurance –
I picture us
driving twin
beat-up rattletraps,
outdated,
outmoded,
outdone
by life’s eternal,
infernal
highway of regret,
so accustomed
to the road rage age
we forget
to notice
each other.

And then
something happens,
and it’s as if
I see you
for the first time
and you see me
as I really am.
Simultaneously
we shift to a
higher gear.

Cruising
carefree,
comfortably –
I picture us
driving twin
compact cars,
economical
but high-performing,
top of their class,
and we trade
smiles and
thoughts behind
the smiles
from side-by-side
lanes, moving
slowly but
with momentum
together.

And then
something happens,
and it’s as if
I see you
for the first time
and you see me
as I really am.
Simultaneously
we shift to a
higher gear.

Falling
fast, not down
but forward –
I picture us
driving twin
Jaguar XJ220s,
racing green,
shooting
the straightaway
like stars,
flash of
speed
and
power,
all thrust
and throttle.

And then
something happens,
and it’s as if
I see you
for the first time
and you see me
as I really am.
Simultaneously
we shift to a
higher gear.

Circling
in elliptical
cycles –
I picture us
driving twin
souped-up
stock cars,
different numbers,
different colors,
what’s inside
one and same.
Exhilarated,
we take
the turns,
edging each
other slightly,
playfully,
all energy
and excitement,
revving
our engines
at the finish.

And then
something happens,
and it’s as if
I see you
for the first time
and you see me
as I really am.
Simultaneously
we shift to a
higher gear.

Soaring
so smoothly
we forget
who we are
and where we are –
I picture us
driving twin
time machines,
caught up
by a wondrous wind,
on a magic carpet ride
through dreams
long held and
those unimagined.
We glide
effortlessly,
transported
into realms
of revelation
and back again.

And then
something happens,
and it’s as if
I see you
for the first time
and you see me
as I really am.
Simultaneously
we shift to a
higher gear.

Collapsing,
unfolding,
we are
like two stars
converging
into a single light
and then
exploding
into a supernova – 
I picture us
driving twin
galactic symphonies
of light
to kaleidoscopic effect,
re-enacting
a performance
of perfect peace,
contributing
to a universal
shift
into love.
 


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 Reviews of "Shifting Gears"
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
an excellent, imaginative write...great job

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Excellent! I loved the style of this poem, and what it had to say.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
that's a poet ... never let work interfere with your surge of creativity ...

Reviewed on December 18, 2004
(((dawn)))

your mastery of words draws the reader into your story and soars with the brilliance of your imagery--a fantastic write you've penned

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

i wish for you a very merry Christmas, too :) you'll be missed :(

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
The unique building of a true love story. Beautiful! Michelle

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
What a fantastic imaginative write Dawn! You always
write such unique poems. Take care and have a wonderful Christmas!
will miss you!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Excellent write Dawn....and Happy Holidays right back at you!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Unique point of view. Well done, Dawn. Best wishes of love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Happy holidays, Dawn! WONDERFUL poem!

D

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
A truly unique and compelling write, enjoyed this very much, Dawn.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Well Done, Dawn, and try not to burn out that galactic light working too hard.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Uplifting, and very well done..

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
I would've switched from stock cars to twin space shuttles and THEN time machines, but I guess time machines are close enough. Have yourself some happy holidays and a Merry Christmas.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
I love the way you invision things! Fnatastic write :-)

I fully understnad about the job. Mine is taking a lot of my energry too because of the season. Thank you for taking the time to post this one! :-)


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