This is excellent, Dawn. My heart breaks for your sadness. What on earth would we depressed people do if we didn't have our writing as an outlet? I thank God for it.
Outstanding composition! Excellent imagery! Can feel the helplessness and desparation. "Oh, to sink into oblivion!" I think I've had these thoughts before! Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
Cynthia
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2005
You know the poem may be prophetic in that somewhere an iceberg just might break loose and because of global warming may melt. An most interesting write here.
one feels the iciness of the seas. the helplessness in the slow melting of dreams. the aching pain of going on through the storms...and wondering if things will ever change. this is a powerhouse dynamo of mood and imagery, so intense, it hurts--BRAVA! hope things improve soon
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
Allen
Take care,
Sherry
Outstanding composition! Excellent imagery! Can feel the helplessness and desparation. "Oh, to sink into oblivion!" I think I've had these thoughts before! Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
Cynthia
under the heavy weight of frozen feelings
a choice had to be made...
Superb write on the topic Dawn!
one feels the iciness of the seas. the helplessness in the slow melting of dreams. the aching pain of going on through the storms...and wondering if things will ever change. this is a powerhouse dynamo of mood and imagery, so intense, it hurts--BRAVA! hope things improve soon
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(