perhaps a little overstated or harsh, but then I always go a little over the top - or is it off the cliff? consider this poem the only alternative I see to not stepping on the pedal tonight. DR
You were the one who saved me; you didn’t mean to do it.
You were hope’s burning flame, dispelling darkness in me.
You were everything I loved, everything I would become.
You were a master teacher; you made me believe I could.
You were a lousy mentor, but the only one I had.
You were a fair boss, right up until you canned me, kicked me.
You were all integrity swept out with good intentions.
You were a brother in Christ who shunned me like a devil.
You were the silent witness who stood by and watched me hang.
You were the best friend of all and one I never really had.
You are the great pretender, keeping up appearances.
You are self-proclaimed leader, example to the wand’ring.
You are all fidelity except when it comes to truth.
You are a pilgrimwalking toward the only light you know.
You are foolfollowing crumbs in fearful forest dark.
You are certainof your rules, rigid system of belief.
You are oblivious and forget to practice what you preach.
You are torn, conflicted by what is, what you think should be.
You are doing what you can to measure up to standard.
You are a man, not a god; you must turn, forgive yourself.
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If we can't forgive ourself, how can we forgive others?
An excellent write, Dawn--thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
John
Love Tinka
Forgiving is always cleansing and it is imperiative
that we forgive ourselves as well...
Love, Eileen
Excellent writing, Dawn.
Take care,
Sherry