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What You Were, Who You Are to Me
by Dawn Richerson → (All Poetry by Dawn Richerson)
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perhaps a little overstated or harsh, but then I always go a little over the top - or is it off the cliff? consider this poem the only alternative I see to not stepping on the pedal tonight. DR

You were
the one who saved me;
you didn’t mean to do it.

You were
hope’s burning flame,
dispelling darkness in me.

You were
everything I loved,
everything I would become.

You were
a master teacher;
you made me believe I could.

You were
a lousy mentor,
but the only one I had.

You were
a fair boss, right up
until you canned me, kicked me.

You were
all integrity
swept out with good intentions.

You were
a brother in Christ
who shunned me like a devil.

You were
the silent witness
who stood by and watched me hang.

You were
the best friend of all
and one I never really had.

You are
the great pretender,
keeping up appearances.

You are
self-proclaimed leader,
example to the wand’ring.

You are
all fidelity
except when it comes to truth.

You are
a pilgrim walking
toward the only light you know.

You are
fool following
crumbs in fearful forest dark.

You are
certain of your rules,
rigid system of belief.

You are
oblivious and forget
to practice what you preach.

You are
torn, conflicted by
what is, what you think should be.

You are
doing what you can
to measure up to standard.

You are
a man, not a god;
you must turn, forgive yourself.


 


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 Reviews of "What You Were, Who You Are to Me"
Reviewed on February 6, 2005
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If we can't forgive ourself, how can we forgive others?

An excellent write, Dawn--thank you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
and sometimes forgiving yourself can be one of the hardest things in the world... I liked the style in this...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
I think I know a person like this, too! I LOVED how the certain words are darker, reaaaally makes it even more powerful.

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Powerful.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
outstanding write...

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Wow, wonderful Dawn.
John

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
A powerful look at the reality of a person, positive and negative, human.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
Direct, simply stated, yet the message packs a powerful punch. Excellent write Dawn. Michelle

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 13, 2005
emotively powerful and reflective ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Wow magnificnt Dawn....sounds like i know this person well!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Great write.

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
It surely is hard to get past someone treating you badly. This is an excellent write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Dawn, another therapeutic write done with excellence.
Forgiving is always cleansing and it is imperiative
that we forgive ourselves as well...

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
You are a man, not a god; you must turn, forgive yourself.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Forgiving our self is paramount if we intend to continue to love.
Excellent writing, Dawn.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Good psychological advice... forgiving ourselves can be very freeing.

Reviewed on January 12, 2005
emotive write; excellent lines! well done, dawn! :(


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