weird things happening with text.... hope you can read this!
When love birthed itself within me, in some safe cocoon I never knew was there transformed me into someone I didn’t know I’d be, sky moved and earth could not hold me. My soul flew on butterfly wings. All my dreams took flight. Life made sense because I loved you – finally I could see.
It's so beautiful about the feelings of love. This one reminds me of my own poem "Knocking Me Silly" - it's also about the feeling of being in love and how wonderful it feels.
Great work Dawn! I shall be back to post some more poems later on.
Lots of love,
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Beautidful,
"sky moved and earth could not hold me.
My soul flew on butterfly wings. All my dreams took flight.
Life made sense because I loved you – finally I could see. "
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Just as life during the pandemic was color-coded with different hues representing different levels of danger, life in its aftermath has become shaded in similar ways. As a self-styled “Seeker of Beauty with Beauty,” (borrowing from a quote by W.E.B.
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I love including butterflies in my poems!
Hello and nice to meet you - ShyPoet1
Great work Dawn! I shall be back to post some more poems later on.
Lots of love,
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
"sky moved and earth could not hold me.
My soul flew on butterfly wings. All my dreams took flight.
Life made sense because I loved you – finally I could see. "