watch
where the dreams of children
drift
remember
when they were your dreams
believe
not in the pain
but in dancing
in the rain
naked and unashamed
winter rhyme
sweet water cold as ice
if you love once
can you love twice
mirror mirror
tell one true
so much beauty
is old ever new
snowflakes
falling upon your eyes
diversity
peace on earth
where the dreams of children
drift
remember
Dualities. part of the form. Complete and Begin in the same reality. A bit Harder like jazz. I jump from Blues to Jazz. Experience and then think. jude and mad
Hi: I think I'd like some punctuation in this poem. L11-18 can be taken with the lines both before and after them, and somehow seem unrelated in places. Some of this is excellent. Some I'm not sure how to read, and in a couple of places not sure what it has to do with winter. I do love the rhyme.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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