Redemption (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 4, 2009

a powerfully beautiful write Becca
Loved every line
Love 7 peace be with you

William

Reviewed on February 26, 2009

"being easy isn't pretty"! -- saw that on a bumper sticker of an automobile driven by an attractive young woman once -- for some reason, I instantly recalled it when I read your poem Becca -- I sense the remorse of a woman of the night -- seeking atonement and the opportunity for her chance at true love -- your verbiage has captured this with great compassion -- much love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

Becca, the passion expressed here is palpable and
the lament goes deep! Superb!

Eileen

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Excellent and deep poem,very expressive and powerful.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Quite powerful. And LOL at Salty Walt!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

"...toe curling ecstasy..." never had one of those, but yes, once went half deaf by an orgasmic blood curling scream...now, don't remember who of us did that...

Georg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

There is much depth to these verses in this poem that deserves much more than a single reading. Thank you, Becca. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Becca,,,Such emotions expressed in this heartfelt write...excellent!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Boy oh boy, is this one good!! When I worked in the hospital for all those years, it sometimes like the nurses were just passing me around. There were times when I felt so cheap and used.

NOT

~W~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Stunning passion in these yearning lines - wow. Rebecca, I concur, one of your best! My new favorite of yours. DEFINATELY a keeper.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Becca, quite intensely written. Your opening verses smacked me right in the face! "Unfulfilled life and love experienced beneath stained sheets",
Wow what a way to begin this amazing poem.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

there is a lot of depth in these few lines-love it!

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Very nice lesson, My favorite line

"Seductive unknowns are studied and learned til� orgasms screamed"

Thank you for sharing! Be Well, Carin

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

Can't say it any better than what Felix has said. Amen.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

One of your best Becca...it touches the cravings and longings of the lonely as fulfillment screams not only to be sated but just to have the human contact of being wanted.

hugs
Fee